St Raymund Penyafort, a miraculous voyage, and the pitfalls of wokeness in Collects

The feast of St Raymund of Penyafort (1175-1275) is celebrated today in the traditional calendar, (7 January in the modern calendar.) Here is the collect in the Roman Missal used before 1962: Deus, qui beĆ”tum RaymĆŗndum pÅnitĆ©ntiƦ sacramĆ©nti insĆgnem minĆstrum elegĆsti, et per maris undas mirabĆliter traduxĆsti: concĆ©de; ut ejus intercessióne dignos pÅnitĆ©ntiƦ fructus fĆ”cere, et ad ƦtĆ©rnƦ salĆŗtis portum pervenĆre valeĆ”mus. O God, Who chose blessed Raymund to be a renowned minister of the sacrament of Penance, and miraculously brought him through the waves of the sea, grant that by his intercession we may produce worthy fruits from our penitence and be capable of reaching the haven of eternal salvation. and here is the collect from the modern Roman Missal: Deus, qui beĆ”tum RaimĆŗndum presbýterum insĆgnis in peccatóres et in captĆvos misericórdiƦ virtĆŗte decorĆ”sti, eius nobis intercessióne concĆ©de, ut, a peccĆ”ti servitĆŗte solĆŗti, quƦ tibi sunt plĆ”cita lĆberis mĆ©ntibus exsequĆ”mur. ...