St Raymund Penyafort, a miraculous voyage, and the pitfalls of wokeness in Collects

The feast of St Raymund of Penyafort (1175-1275) is celebrated today in the traditional calendar, (7 January in the modern calendar.) Here is the collect in the Roman Missal used before 1962: Deus, qui beátum RaymĂşndum pĹ“nitĂ©ntiæ sacramĂ©nti insĂgnem minĂstrum elegĂsti, et per maris undas mirabĂliter traduxĂsti: concĂ©de; ut ejus intercessiĂłne dignos pĹ“nitĂ©ntiæ fructus fácere, et ad ætĂ©rnæ salĂştis portum pervenĂre valeámus. O God, Who chose blessed Raymund to be a renowned minister of the sacrament of Penance, and miraculously brought him through the waves of the sea, grant that by his intercession we may produce worthy fruits from our penitence and be capable of reaching the haven of eternal salvation. and here is the collect from the modern Roman Missal: Deus, qui beátum RaimĂşndum presbĂ˝terum insĂgnis in peccatĂłres et in captĂvos misericĂłrdiæ virtĂşte decorásti, eius nobis intercessiĂłne concĂ©de, ut, a peccáti servitĂşte solĂşti, quæ tibi sunt plácita lĂberis mĂ©ntibus exsequámur. ...